An opinion essay presents our personal opinion on a particular topic. We need to state our opinion clearly and support it with examples
or reasons.
INTRODUCTION
ñIn the first paragraph we present the topic and state our opinion clearly.
MAIN BODY
ñIn the second and third paragraphs we present our viewpoints and give reasons/examples. We present each viewpoint, with reasons/examples, in a separate paragraph.
In the fourth paragraph we present the opposing viewpoint and give examples/reasons.
CONCLUSION
ñIn the last paragraph we restate our opinion using different words.
We usually use present tenses in this kind of writing and avoid using informal language such as contractions
(I’ve, she’s) and colloquialisms (What’s up?) etc. We can use phrases like Inmy opinion; I(strongly)believethat; Itseemsto me that to introduce our opinion. We can find opinion essays in newspapers and magazines as articles or letters to the editor, etc.
Analysing the Rubric
47 Read the rubric, underline the key words and answer the questions.
Your local newspaper is asking readers to write an article giving their opinion on the following statement:
Students should not be allowed to have mobile phones at school.
1 What type of writing is it?
2Who is going to read it?
3What style should you use?
Analysing a Model Text
48 a. Read the article and put the paragraphs into the correct order. What is each paragraph about?
Furthermore, parents who work may need to contact their children. For example, if a parent has to work late, the student has to be told if arrangements have been made for a relative or neighbour to look after them.
In conclusion, I feel that students should be allowed to take mobile phones to school for use in an emergency. However, all phones should certainly be turned off during lessons.
Nowadays more and more students bring their mobile phones to school. While I believe that students should carry mobile phones in case of an emergency, I am strongly opposed to these phones being used at school, particularly in the classroom.
On the other hand, nothing is more disruptive during a lesson than the sound of a mobile phone ringing or playing an annoying tune. Moreover, students who send and receive text messages in class are not paying attention to the lesson.
Firstly, many students travel to and from school without their parents. Therefore, it is important for them to have a mobile phone in case they need help or have an accident on the way to school or home.
Linkers
b.Identify the function of the linking words in bold, then replace them with synonyms from the list below.
ñ in addition ñ also ñ to sum up ñ although |
ñ as a result |
ñ to begin with ñ nonetheless ñ in contrast |
ñ for instance |
49 Underline the correct linking words.
1There are several reasons why we should all install burglar alarms in our cars. To begin with/ Furthermore, car theft is a big problem in the city.
2Mobile phones are becoming smaller and more efficient. Although/In addition, many models allow you to access the Internet.
3It is up to parents to teach a child right from wrong. In conclusion/For
example, they must learn not to take things that don’t belong to them.
4To sum up, while I agree that shoplifting is a crime, it is not nearly as serious as other crimes such as/apart from murder or kidnapping.
Register
50 a. Which register is each paragraph written in (formal, semi-formal, informal etc)? Give reasons for your answer. Which paragraph is suitable for an opinion essay? Why?
AI strongly believe that we rely too much on technology today. This means that we are losing important skills such as personal communication. For instance, people who spend long hours in front of a computer no longer know how to talk to other people, and may even feel uncomfortable in the company of others.
BI think computer games are good stuff. They help us learn all about technology. This is important ’cause it’ll help us to get ready for our future jobs. You know, all jobs in the future will need computer skills.